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6/12/2019 c1 Angel Ran
Ahhhhh this was so good! x_X I'm very very sorry to hear it's just a one shot, but really enjoyed reading it, and Cain's devastation that Abel is in enemy hands. Angst is my favourite lol XD although you can bet I'll be imagining lots of hurt/comfort, followed by a happy ending for those two! *cries* Thanks for posting!
2/28/2016 c1 fanfic3112
This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/13/2015 c1 fanfic3112
I know you said this was just a one shot but it's really a half shot or a story beginning that's just hanging begging plllleeeeaaassse write what happens next. Like a cliff hanger just hanging! I hope you reconsider and write more cause as a story beginning it is really really good and interesting!
8/1/2015 c1 WafflesAreLegit
Thus was THE VERY BEST one-shot I have ever read!
3/10/2015 c1 Guest
this is one of the best ive read so far, very well written, and close to the style of the original. I really wish it wasnt a one shot. thankyou for the good read- no, it was great. short, but great :)
2/4/2014 c1 7Inactive88
My freaking feels...!
1/11/2014 c1 Guest
I like the start!
7/1/2013 c1 Ricky Thatcher
This is so crazy for me right now! My sister and I were just talking about Cain and Abel fanfiction earlier TODAY and I look on your page and BOOM paradox! Thank you for being rad!
5/28/2013 c1 6Darth Vader C11
Oh my god I really really love the feeling this conveys. This reads really well...I love the attention to dialogue. I also like that this story focuses on only the important details...every single word is written for a reason and it doesn't waste time talking about how each of the characters walk from one place to another - not that any other stories in this specific fandom do that either, heh - but anyways...gosh, I couldn't stop frowning while I was reading this, and I mean that in the best way possible. I just felt all of Cain's emotions: his drive and stubbornness to rescue HIS Abel, and how he needed Ethos to help him, and poor baby Daniel oh my gosh. Ugh the whole thing just gave me chills. I hope to God that you update this soon because I'm loving it so far! I really wanna know what happens next...if Cain and Danny can rescue Ethan.
5/27/2013 c1 Guest
I like this
5/27/2013 c1 rraku2002
Wow is this a kick ass story! Dear God that image of Abel bound and gagged is so horrific, and Cain's anguish with him sobbing in the Reliant so real. Abel must at least know Cain will come for him. I hope...and the whole Ethos-Deimos part is wonderful; I can't wait for more of this I hope soon please!
5/27/2013 c1 6asocialconstruct
ouch. I love Cain and Ethos' relationship in this, even if Ethos doesn't offer to help, they're really sort of sweet and sad together. And that scene in the cafeteria with Abel-how very properly horrifying. D: Poor Abel and poor Cain, I'm very much looking forward to seeing where else this goes.
5/27/2013 c1 Lita
Gah x_x I was not ready for all those feelings. This is so great, please continue, it's wonderful!
5/27/2013 c1 Guest
wow, this was amazing! i really hope there's another chapter!

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