1/10 c19 2guycecil90
This was so well written that I could not put it down because it was just that good.
This was so well written that I could not put it down because it was just that good.
12/30/2018 c18 Guest
Continue writing! THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! I'd like to see the aftermath of Jesslie becoming official!
Keep writing more! BtT is a great movie and with tons of potential in fanfiction!
Continue writing! THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! I'd like to see the aftermath of Jesslie becoming official!
Keep writing more! BtT is a great movie and with tons of potential in fanfiction!
6/2/2018 c19 Guest
What a fascinating story. Loved it. Great great job.
What a fascinating story. Loved it. Great great job.
8/19/2017 c1 testar1212
Loved it! Great story and a perfect balance between keeping the characters as in the movie while at the same time adding your own layer to them. And so much love
Loved it! Great story and a perfect balance between keeping the characters as in the movie while at the same time adding your own layer to them. And so much love
10/16/2016 c18 2RVA-Writer
This was a great story. Thanks for sharing. Makes me want to write my own Bridge to Terabithia fic.
This was a great story. Thanks for sharing. Makes me want to write my own Bridge to Terabithia fic.
9/3/2016 c19 time-travelling teacup
This is such an adorable, amazing story! Love Jess and Leslie, and your story conveyed their chemistry! The plot was also full of adventure and mystery, plus plenty of fluff and romance! Loved it! :)
This is such an adorable, amazing story! Love Jess and Leslie, and your story conveyed their chemistry! The plot was also full of adventure and mystery, plus plenty of fluff and romance! Loved it! :)
1/7/2016 c19 21Toaofwriting
This was quite possibly the cutest, fluffiest, Jess/Leslie, or indeed any ship, romance fic I've ever read. Kudos on doing a great job with characterization, plot, and everything else.
One little criticism: I feel like sometimes Jess and his sisters have slightly elevated diction, which feels a bit off for them.
Otherwise, wonderfully done!
This was quite possibly the cutest, fluffiest, Jess/Leslie, or indeed any ship, romance fic I've ever read. Kudos on doing a great job with characterization, plot, and everything else.
One little criticism: I feel like sometimes Jess and his sisters have slightly elevated diction, which feels a bit off for them.
Otherwise, wonderfully done!
11/22/2015 c1 BlackHoleDolyhir97
I've been following this story on and off for about 2 years now, and I must say I love it.
I don't really know why. I usually hate things like this. If I had to put a finger on why, I'd go with the distinctly American theme unearthing secrets conveys. Weird interpretation, right? I just love the whole small town rural setting going on here. I thought you characterised jess and Leslie perfectly. Your oc creations were too generic and bland for my liking though.
I've been following this story on and off for about 2 years now, and I must say I love it.
I don't really know why. I usually hate things like this. If I had to put a finger on why, I'd go with the distinctly American theme unearthing secrets conveys. Weird interpretation, right? I just love the whole small town rural setting going on here. I thought you characterised jess and Leslie perfectly. Your oc creations were too generic and bland for my liking though.