1/12/2020 c1 9DjoDjoCute
I have to review this to tell you that I enjoyed this one-shot. It is so well-written. You have perfectly captured the characters and I felt like I was truly watching a scene from the movie. It made you realise how dark it would have been if Commodus had won. I felt Commodus' lust, obsession and calm. And I also felt Lucilla's disgust, fear and courage. Very well handled.
I have to review this to tell you that I enjoyed this one-shot. It is so well-written. You have perfectly captured the characters and I felt like I was truly watching a scene from the movie. It made you realise how dark it would have been if Commodus had won. I felt Commodus' lust, obsession and calm. And I also felt Lucilla's disgust, fear and courage. Very well handled.
10/6/2019 c1 Nelly
Damn that was disturbing and hot
Damn that was disturbing and hot
4/28/2015 c1 Eggy Weggs
This story is great! You wrote the characters so well, this story deserves more favorites and reviews.
This story is great! You wrote the characters so well, this story deserves more favorites and reviews.
6/7/2014 c1 9Savvy Sammy-13
I absolutely loved this. I was shocked to see that you had not been given a review yet, so I felt the need to leave one. The writing and characterization were perfect. I really enjoy Commodus fics, and I have to say, after I watched the movie, I gave a great deal of thought to what may have happened if Commodus had indeed won the fight. This fic satisfied my need for a Commodus fix for a little while. I'm glad that you wrote about him winning the fight. Great Job.
I absolutely loved this. I was shocked to see that you had not been given a review yet, so I felt the need to leave one. The writing and characterization were perfect. I really enjoy Commodus fics, and I have to say, after I watched the movie, I gave a great deal of thought to what may have happened if Commodus had indeed won the fight. This fic satisfied my need for a Commodus fix for a little while. I'm glad that you wrote about him winning the fight. Great Job.