4/27/2018 c1 3Sonic Key
I liked your take on how Pallis was imprisoned after Adakias' death, rather than immediately being with Anhura, like the musical and Adakias himself seemed to hint at that being what should happen. Anhura wouldn't forgive him that quickly, and I don't think he would forgive himself either.
The end was bittersweet, especially to learn Anhura is expecting a child.
I liked your take on how Pallis was imprisoned after Adakias' death, rather than immediately being with Anhura, like the musical and Adakias himself seemed to hint at that being what should happen. Anhura wouldn't forgive him that quickly, and I don't think he would forgive himself either.
The end was bittersweet, especially to learn Anhura is expecting a child.
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