3/18/2018 c1 Texcatlipoka
Very engaging first chapter, especially Presto's appearance at the end.
My only criticism is how it's slightly jarring to start the scene in the cages, then be put straight into Mike's long flashback, but otherwise it held my attention all through!
Very engaging first chapter, especially Presto's appearance at the end.
My only criticism is how it's slightly jarring to start the scene in the cages, then be put straight into Mike's long flashback, but otherwise it held my attention all through!
11/19/2017 c14 DinoWriter23
Sorry for the delay in reviewing. Life got in the way.
Well, this is a fine kettle of fish they've gotten themselves into.
Sorry for the delay in reviewing. Life got in the way.
Well, this is a fine kettle of fish they've gotten themselves into.
6/7/2017 c11 Guest
Muinto continue com este belo trabalho
Muinto continue com este belo trabalho
6/20/2016 c11 15DinoWriter23
Well, that can't be good. At least that dragon wasn't the five-headed one from the show
Well, that can't be good. At least that dragon wasn't the five-headed one from the show
6/20/2016 c7 DinoWriter23
Oh great. Now Mike's been turned into a rodent by a little... whatever that was.
Oh great. Now Mike's been turned into a rodent by a little... whatever that was.
6/20/2016 c6 DinoWriter23
Well, it would appear that times moves differently in the Realm than it does on Earth.
Well, it would appear that times moves differently in the Realm than it does on Earth.
6/20/2016 c5 DinoWriter23
Oh, that's why that happened. To show Mike's a cleric. Still, that came as a big surprise.
Oh, that's why that happened. To show Mike's a cleric. Still, that came as a big surprise.
6/20/2016 c2 DinoWriter23
He doesn't grasp the concept that Emily's been changed into an orc, does he?
He doesn't grasp the concept that Emily's been changed into an orc, does he?