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7/14 c1 1Rainbow Prime
But how will I know what parts interest me if I don't read the entire thing?
7/3 c47 1CuddlyMadScientist99
I’ve never met a fictional character that is this science of CEst and I love it
4/18 c1 rogerohair
Oh my god, that's the definition of awful. I'm so sorry for everything you've been through. Thank God you found this to help you. Hopefully you'll be at peace with your mind soon. ?
3/4 c4 little mouse
I was um, reading this chapter, and the previous ones, and it made me tear up. I'll try not to be too lengthy. I don't even know if you check the reviews here.

I was abused as a child, severely. My parents (my mother and stepfather), who had power over me, tormented me and hurt me in ways I cannot even begin to describe. When I was expulsed from that household and situated with my biological father, I fell in something akin to love with a young man down the road from me. We became close. But my PTSD and terrible mood swings tormented me, and my emotionalism caused him to abandon me. So often has humanity let me down, I've come to love robots more than people oftentimes.

"But we don't need to survive anymore, I realise. The humans are gone, and everything is calm and quiet and under my control, as it should be. Now we can live." hit me very hard. To this day, I still mentally live the way I lived many years ago, under my mother and stepfather. My mind subconsciously waits for the day I'll be mistreated, abandoned, and expulsed. Hyper-vigilance. I no longer need to live that way anymore. Something about that passage comforts me and brings me closer to something that hurts and cowers and bites and gnashes deep inside.

Someday I will remember that I no longer need to live this way. I will always think of this sweet, hopeful passage when I dream of that day.

The themes too of GLaDOS hating how humans made her do things and harmed her and sabotaged her speak to me so deeply. I was there once, too, and my mind still torments me with thoughts from that time. I am also so quick to cut off anyone that I perceive to be harming me in that manner.

I may only be 4 chapters in, but you've managed to speak to a very hurt part of me in a way I've never had a work of fiction do. Thank you. Please, don't stop writing.
2/15 c117 1innusune
Wow, I loved this so much, just finished binge reading all 117 chapters so far
1/24 c117 2StroudleyA1683
When Claptrap took Wheatley to Pandora in Part 100, how did Wheatley's battery not die? Did they just stash a small generator, some diesel and a few crocodile clips?
1/22 c16 1CuddlyMadScientist99
OMG i had something like that on a smaller scale disen i was younger. So im blind, and in primary school no one would kunderst more and they ′ewd bully me and exclude me. They'd always brag about nice things they brag about nice things they were doing, e.g. going to parties and stuff, and I could never take party Not to mention this one mean girl just being mean all the time. Holy shit I was fead up. Im fine now DW although sometimes all I wanna do is scream! Im so similar to GLaDOS.
1/22 c9 CuddlyMadScientist99
Im also Real stubborn too, and kinda a bad kid sometimes. I shout, I swear, I rebell, I speak my mind, I don't give up on anything. Also some days I just hang out in bed eating junk food because I can, I hate a bunch of people because I can and they hurt me and I got into an arguement earlier today about how three-year-olds need to learn more science. Im also resourceful and intelligent, and I kept asking for instogram even when my Mum wanted nothing to do with it. Yeah, Im Gladdy's soulmate hahahahaha. Dont mess with this
1/21 c117 Insane Wise-man
You made this pandemic a bit more lightly, and I strongly recommend your story to some friends of mine
thanks for this so far
1/21 c117 Ten
Formatting broke
1/21 c117 CuddlyMadScientist99
Cool chapter
10/30/2020 c112 Guest
Cool chapter im liking claptrap
10/27/2020 c8 9Jdog4161
in my opinion if you're writing or reading stories based off the events and characters of another book, movie, show or game you're introverted, because instead of doing something with people you're inside being introverted writing or reading about something thats already officially owned by someone else.

P.S if this offends any of you hopefully you fell better that i'm insulting myself in this.
-Jdog4161
10/22/2020 c116 Rypley
I can't say anything more than this is amazing as hell.

PD: hearing Isak Danielson's Playing with love while thinking about GLaDOS and Wheatley's relationship is pure awesomeness
10/9/2020 c35 2StroudleyA1683
So the little girl in that story is GLaDOS, the ball is Wheatley, & the doll is Chell, yes? & the something the little girl makes is robot Caroline, & the mother who leaves is human Caroline.
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