12/22/2013 c1 454samanddianefan10
hey I'm always happy to see a new writer! And the fact that this is a foxtrot story- all the better!
I do have some suggestions. The first and most important is formatting...paragraphs, spaces, ect. If I can help you feel free to pm me and I'll go into more detail.
nonetheless, great effort and I hope you continue to write. Good luck and thanks for this!
hey I'm always happy to see a new writer! And the fact that this is a foxtrot story- all the better!
I do have some suggestions. The first and most important is formatting...paragraphs, spaces, ect. If I can help you feel free to pm me and I'll go into more detail.
nonetheless, great effort and I hope you continue to write. Good luck and thanks for this!