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3/22/2014 c1 K
The language feels wrong. Words like Hussy don't belong here
12/22/2013 c1 454samanddianefan10
hey I'm always happy to see a new writer! And the fact that this is a foxtrot story- all the better!

I do have some suggestions. The first and most important is formatting...paragraphs, spaces, ect. If I can help you feel free to pm me and I'll go into more detail.

nonetheless, great effort and I hope you continue to write. Good luck and thanks for this!

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