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11/24/2013 c1 SammyDePat
Hey little lovedreamer :D!

That was a really interesting point of view I think! I liked how the spirit could actually feel Kalas' pain, and that's how the reader knew they could point with him. It was a nice, serious chapter, but also light-hearted in a way. It creates the same atmosphere (hopefull ,yet confusing) like in when you start as the spirit in the game I guess, and that's what I like!

That was a really nice chapter, I'm impressed! Well done :D! Keep up the good work! Totally looking forward for more !
So keep on writing ;P!

Greetings, your Sammy ;)!

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