9/24/2020 c4 2MonalisaRomano17
I hope you update soon I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out. As for the orb I'll have to think on that if I'm able to think of anything at all. (Smiles nervously) Keep up the good work :)
I hope you update soon I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out. As for the orb I'll have to think on that if I'm able to think of anything at all. (Smiles nervously) Keep up the good work :)
7/21/2014 c4 13MistyLilyValley
I don't think she is. I think Dani is a great character; beautiful, intelligent, and unique. :)
I don't think she is. I think Dani is a great character; beautiful, intelligent, and unique. :)
7/29/2013 c3 BluePhantom99
Interesting chapter. I liked the argument between Sparx and Gibson. Good job.
Interesting chapter. I liked the argument between Sparx and Gibson. Good job.
7/29/2013 c2 BluePhantom99
Wait, Jinmay is ALSO a member of the hyperforce. I don't like Jinmay but she is. You pretty much gave away the plot in what Daniel was thinking. Which isn't really good in the beginning chapters. I'm glad you spaced out the lines this time. It made the chapter MUCH easier to read.
Wait, Jinmay is ALSO a member of the hyperforce. I don't like Jinmay but she is. You pretty much gave away the plot in what Daniel was thinking. Which isn't really good in the beginning chapters. I'm glad you spaced out the lines this time. It made the chapter MUCH easier to read.
7/29/2013 c1 BluePhantom99
Nice chappie! But could you space the sentences out more so it's easier to read?
Nice chappie! But could you space the sentences out more so it's easier to read?
2/25/2013 c5 13MistyLilyValley
Wow! Awesome story. How about for a idea - Skeleton King tries to kipnap, or try to meet Dani on his own, and as she skillfully defends herself, Chiro soon discovers the truth with his own eyes?
Wow! Awesome story. How about for a idea - Skeleton King tries to kipnap, or try to meet Dani on his own, and as she skillfully defends herself, Chiro soon discovers the truth with his own eyes?
12/31/2012 c5 MagicMitty
Please update, pleeeease! It's a great story and I'm curious about what happens next! (:
Please update, pleeeease! It's a great story and I'm curious about what happens next! (:
11/5/2012 c3 4areskickass13
Ok I love this so far. Looking forward to reading what exactly the relationship between dani and the Skeleton king is like. (I mean I get they're related but I'm more curious about why she was living on the streets). Update real soon.
Ok I love this so far. Looking forward to reading what exactly the relationship between dani and the Skeleton king is like. (I mean I get they're related but I'm more curious about why she was living on the streets). Update real soon.