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4/6 c11 Guest
Aquí una rese?a en espa?ol, perdon pero el traductor de google no me funciona;
Escuche la frase hace un tiempito (en realidad la leí pero eso no importa), "Muere siendo un heroe o vive lo suficiente para convertirte en villano", esta frase se conecta mucho con la historia, despues de todo Lucas en su busqueda de la perfeccion prácticamente ignoro y erradico sus sentimientos, Lucas es el tipo de personaje que necesita ir a terapia, esto en un ámbito literal, vivió muchas cosas que un ni?o no debio hacerlo (Su hermano se suicido en la cara, eso deja más de una marca). Que no presente dolor o algo más despues de eso no significa que no los sienta, sinceramente en ese aspecto crítico a Flint por mal padre, y un poco a sus amigos, pero en ese punto no me quiero meter.

Nunca me gusto la agregación de personajes que no estaban en la historia original en un fanfiction, pero a usted no se lo puedo negar, todos sus personajes que agrego eran necesarios, tienen personalidad y sentido por el lugar del que viene, aber si yo fuera Rob también quisiera matar a Lucas.

El personaje que quizas si crítico un poco es a Claus, siento que no se profundizo lo necesario en este personaje, siendo que desde mi perspectiva esta un poco igualado con su hermano en lo que da?ado psicológicamente respecta, pero esto se puede solucionar ya que la historia aun no termina.

Hay muchas cosas de las que quiero hablar pero esto tampoco es una rese?a super profunda ni nada, así que por ahí la dejo.

Actualiza por favor, besitos en las manos y cuidate.
Pdst: Tengo la escritura de un ni?o 8 a?os.
10/29/2017 c10 10Ian R. Moros
"He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster."

I love this story. I love its twists and turns, the strong narrative, the dynamic characters, and the way it draws on and expands the themes of the Mother series. In particular I am thinking of the strong nods towards the cycle of violence, how pain and suffering has led so many characters in the story (Lucas, Rob, Porky, etc.) to inflict pain and suffering on others. The anguish they endure strips them of their self-image and identity much like Claus was as the Masked Man. Lucas subconsciously buries his emotions because feeling them is too painful, and thereby loses his compassion, his heart, and grows up to become a tyrant. Those standing against him did so in the hope of saving lives, but so lost sight of that aim that murder became their first solution.

So too can both Lucas and the reader see the temptation this path offered. By losing his feelings Lucas would become impervious to the emotional pain that had dogged him for so long. But by giving up that weakness, Lucas would lose sight of what mattered to him and why, just as Porky had before him. This is a lesson for the younger Lucas, to see that as much as his feelings might leave him vulnerable, his compassion offers him another kind of strength: people to depend on. Notice how alone King Lucas is. Just like Porky: playing with his toys all by himself. By contrast, the young Lucas surrounds himself with friends both old and new, including some who had previously been trying to kill him. This is a great character arc for Lucas to go through.

Excellent work so far. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
9/26/2016 c8 Guest
Update pls
12/30/2015 c8 Guest
Sorry, am I the only person who thinks that these "villains" are just bored as f***? That explain's Pokey's hybrids and army, and that extends to other games as well (Dedede enjoying Kirby fighting him, Slenderman looking for some hilarious faces, hell, Flowey f***ed up the world because he wanted to-AND IT'S PROVEN RIGHT!)
12/30/2015 c8 Guest
Am I the
6/9/2015 c7 JustMe. Hi
Oh my god I love this story! Thank you!
You made like...one mistake, but it was simple, so don't worry about it. :) I make mistakes all the time!
But seriously, awesome job!
5/14/2015 c6 2Moka Cocoa
Man, this was a great series. If you dont plan on finishing it, at least tell me how it ends! Or put an author's knote, ya know?
5/14/2015 c5 Moka Cocoa
Aww, man, why did you stop making this? This is an amazing plot!
1/26/2015 c6 Just Me. Hi
Thank you SO much for continuing this! With the last cliffhanger, I just about DIED! To be honest, I thought this was gonna be one of those stories that you work on for a bit, then leave it to collect mounds of dust and spoil...great writing, by the way. I got sucked in VERY fast, which is a good thing!...scared for Alex, though. Great job! I'm with you all the way! 3
1/7/2015 c6 Guest
Glad to see this story continued. It is truly great.
12/27/2014 c5 Guest
I think you should update this. Don't you? After all, 6 months isn't really a great update schedule for any author.
12/6/2014 c5 Guest
Next chapter plz? T.T
10/4/2014 c5 Guest
Danger outside? Another assassin? Man, this story is just bloody beautiful! It's a work of art that I believe should be exhibited somewhere! Get the next chapter up as soon as you can please!
9/9/2014 c5 IWillPKLoveYouFo
.God.
This is the best thing I've ever read! I definatly didn't expect the change in Lucas's attitude. And Alex is completely adorable!
If I don't get another chapter quickly, I'll cry so freaking hard!
7/27/2014 c5 9Apprentice Writer
It's like every member of Lucas' family is doomed to sadness... That aside, this story is really starting to get interesting. I can't wait until they journey to the future. It's also nice to see Claus on Lucas' side again.
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