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3/29/2015 c7 Radgirl13
I knew that they would live, TINTIN ALWAYS LIVES! I'm a huge tintin nerd /ω\\\
1/14/2013 c8 3Pink-Pencil-Girl303
OH MY GOSH. I just read this story start to finish in one setting and I am amazed. Wow! That was...
SO. GOOD.
It's okay that there wasn't a huge amount of plot, because the flashbacks interspersed throughout it were a mixture of heart-wrenching, adorable, and hilarious. The stories you tied into yours, Peter Pan, The Wizard of Oz - that was so clever and worked really well with the theme of Tintin and Nollie as parents. Little Kiara was so cute and very well written! :D I loved reading all of your dialogue; the only thing that I lamented was that it wasn't long enough. I laughed, I clamped my hands to my mouth at the scary parts, I grinned at Tintin rushing into the hospital where Kiara was being born "Am I- Did I- has the baby..." :3, and, yes, there was quite a bit of fangirling.
Beautiful job. I am so impressed. :)
I can't wait for your stories to come!
1/14/2013 c8 35FossilQueen1984
Wow, twist ending! I was glad to see everyone safe and sound. Don't worry about the sudden ending due to numbering errors and writer's block; be proud that you actually ended your story and not let it rot while you wait for inspiration, like I am right now. Excellent job, and I can't wait to read your next serial.
1/14/2013 c8 4Ambrocean
Yay! An update!
I absolutely love Kiara; she seems like the perfect daughter for Tintin. (And she seems to have inherited things from Tintin AND Nollie. She gets the best of both worlds and all that :D) Great job!
It was a little bit confusing to be jumping ahead like that in the last few chapters but other than that, I really enjoyed this story! Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to your next one!
*raises glass* Cheers!
1/13/2013 c8 25Little Christian
This is such a cute story! I loved how Kiara asked if Tintin was Peter Pan, and if Nollie was Wendy; that's adorable!
12/29/2012 c7 3luvAdventure123
This chapter was great! LOVIN' IT!
12/25/2012 c7 Little Christian
I knew they would make it, so her saying they were going to die didn't freak me. ;) Continue ASAP, plz!
12/25/2012 c6 Little Christian
So glad you updated! But I don't think Tintin would just kill people left and right... Espescially in front of his young daughter. But great chapter, anyway.
12/24/2012 c7 4Ambrocean
Wow…just…wow. Now THAT was intense! Okay, I think I need to take a breather…
*retreats to the nearest corner and comes back two hours later*
All right, I'm good now!
Thanks for updating! It really made my day!
Merry Chrismas to you as well!
God bless, Dancer1023
12/24/2012 c6 Ambrocean
Great to see you back writing again; I missed you! ;)
Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to chapter 7!
11/26/2012 c6 3luvAdventure123
I understand completly. I do have one request though, as soon as you get your computer repaired, can you check out my story and review it? So far, I have ten reviews and I hope that I can get about fifteen. Thanks and have fun!
11/26/2012 c6 25Little Christian
So sorry to hear that. Hope things'll go smoothly later on.
11/25/2012 c6 Dancer1023
No worries, I can completely understand about having faulty old technology…my computer is getting up there too :). Anyway, after I stop crying due to a lack of updates :'( maybe I can finish my own fanfic…
11/22/2012 c5 Dancer1023
I loved this chapter! The part where Tintin was explaining what caused thunderstorms to Kiara made me laugh. :D Can't wait for the next chapter and happy thanksgiving!
11/22/2012 c5 Little Christian
Awww, so sweet. Poor Kiara, I hope she's okay. Continue soon-ish!
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