5/1/2017 c1 India Espionage
awesome!
please write more
awesome!
please write more
11/24/2016 c1 Guest
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING BROUGHT ME TO TEARS THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE THING JUST OMG SO ADORABLE I LOVE ITT
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING BROUGHT ME TO TEARS THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE THING JUST OMG SO ADORABLE I LOVE ITT
4/17/2014 c1 Montessa
Please write more if you havent already! Its beautiful! I cried so hard when i finished the series and I love that you chose to have a daughter for Gemma and Kartik. I seriously hope they end up back together all as a family!
Please write more if you havent already! Its beautiful! I cried so hard when i finished the series and I love that you chose to have a daughter for Gemma and Kartik. I seriously hope they end up back together all as a family!
9/25/2013 c1 Kartik1fan
Where is the rest
Where is the rest
7/4/2013 c1 3ArtemisKey
This is really great. It's really well written. A bit of advice. When you do a cliff hanger, it's usually a major turning point for the story, so make the primere chapter a bit longer describing more daily toughts or actions. Like in this case, a bit more on how much or how often Gemma misses Kartik or maybe describe her dream.
This is off to a very good start and i'm looking foward to seeing more!
This is really great. It's really well written. A bit of advice. When you do a cliff hanger, it's usually a major turning point for the story, so make the primere chapter a bit longer describing more daily toughts or actions. Like in this case, a bit more on how much or how often Gemma misses Kartik or maybe describe her dream.
This is off to a very good start and i'm looking foward to seeing more!
4/17/2013 c1 Guest
Omggggg pleaseeee pleaseeee continue! It looks really promising and I really want a good epilogue to the story!
Omggggg pleaseeee pleaseeee continue! It looks really promising and I really want a good epilogue to the story!
11/23/2012 c1 Guest
Ooh,I haven't read a good Gemma/Kartik fanfic in a while and this looks promising. It has been a while since your kast update, but please continue.(:
-Cheri.
Ooh,I haven't read a good Gemma/Kartik fanfic in a while and this looks promising. It has been a while since your kast update, but please continue.(:
-Cheri.
11/11/2012 c1 mailyn
It's very interesting keep going. :)
It's very interesting keep going. :)