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3/3/2018 c4 Guest
Hi! I am hoping for a FoR reboot as well. So lucky to have stumbled upod this fanfic! Just wanna know there are still hardcore FoR fans around (this review is 3 years overdue ). Thank you for this fic!
12/30/2013 c22 UshinawareTaKaze
Hey! I am back! The chapter was good. However, a few pouinters to be taken care of.

The introduction to the chapter tends to disstracts - this I learnt from personal experience. As much as possible try to chuck out anything that doesn't adds to the plot as it makes the readers lose their interest to read the rest, even if it is well-written. (which it is, in your case.)

Anyway, the chapter had a good flow and the scenes well described. Maybe a bit change in your usage of punctuation would have helped you express better, say, a : or - or ;. maybe you could look that up. A few typos, but it isn't very noticeable.

So, good job overall.

35-38! Whoa! This is going to be on long fiction! Lookng forward to how Koga turned into Kougan Aki! All the best and Ganbare! *waves*
11/12/2013 c21 6Ushinaware Ta Kaze
Ah! Yet another suspense on the survival of humanity. Over-all it was a good chapter; short, but good.

Glad you updated. The plot is thickening, if not anything else. The flow, however, of this chapter seemed to have picked up compared to the other chapter. There was hint of it being rushed. Maybe, because you have a busy schedule. Anyway, no typos or grammar defaults, so Banzai there.

Might I suggest that you divide the past from the present using a line breaker or perhaps mentioning it, otherwise, the transition is felt one the person finishes reading the line.

The story of Kougan aki seems rather interesting. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Great job and all the best!
10/15/2013 c20 Ushinaware Ta Kaze
another great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next and what Kirito does...
7/26/2013 c18 UshinawareTaKaze
I feel too lazy to login. I am actually reading this from my new( and first) office. :P XD Anyway, a good chapter. Though I don't know why, I was expecting more in this chapter-length wise. :P Yeah, I know that's a bit unreasonable. XD

You might want to check the tenses in your story. Anyway, the essence wasn't lost so its good enough. :)

Actually, FoR last scene where Kurei kills Nobunaga in his house is consistent with the history, where Nobunaga was killed for reasons unknown. XD Now that's height of reserach and actuality inclusion in a manga. Anzai did a good job of it. Kagero changed the future, not past. However, since it is your story and it is a fiction, you are allowed to assume whatever you want. But, even the parallel universe is a paradox, which Stephen Hawkings pointed out himself. So, I rather not touch that theory where on cancels the other(or continues to exists). Its way to mind boggling. :P

Anyway, I am looking forward to your next update! And episode 22! (hehe) Till then ATB and TC! *waves*
7/5/2013 c17 Ushinaware Ta Kaze
Yay! You updated! So, now, I have many questions! Will Fuuko and Tokiya die? If they do, the future will change and Mars won't existed. Then, everything will change. Argh! This is all too mind boggling.

Can't wait for more!
6/16/2013 c16 33koganei k
whoa! how perceptive :) :) :) some of what has been said, I don't plan to reveal until four episodes later XD XD XD
6/16/2013 c16 6Ushinaware Ta Kaze
You updated! Damn! Miles changed the past! Now that Domon and Recca is dead, it will mean that the future is going to change drastically, right?

Things are really getting interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter! ATB!
5/29/2013 c15 33koganei k
Domon was 16 in the year 2003 where his mother is around 46 (assuming a late marriage at 30 yrs old). At 2062, Domon would be 75 while his mother would roughly be at around 105. That's one tough woman! )) Still, realistically possible haha! Come to think of it, the greater question seems to be how Domon could still fight like a bull at 75? Hmm... since this is fiction... XD XD

With regards to "Don't try to change the timeline", the last few lines of the chapter has said it all... I think. Kaoru shot Joker in the J Keeper incident. It never happened in the manga.

xoxo o
5/29/2013 c15 6Ushinaware Ta Kaze
When the instructions went "Don't try to change the timeline." I was like- change it! Change it! XD Ah, how I yearn to see the entire Hokage back. :P Though I have a question, how could Domon's mom be still alive then? Wasn't Domon himself 60 or so? 0.0 Man, she is one stubborn granny then. :P God! When things were diviating without him actually doing anything, I got, "What the hell is happening?!" Hahaha...You really rock at mystery!
Can't wait to see how Kaoru plays his part! Update soon!
5/29/2013 c14 Ushinaware Ta Kaze
When the planewalker said her did it for Tokiya, I went WHAT? XD I knew he was bluffing! XD
And poor Domon, Ugh, eating copes isn't a very pleasant image at all. _ Sigh. Well, that's Domon, not the smartest, but a strong and faithful friend, eventhough he did give Tokiya's whereabouts. *Sigh* Sticks and stones. Oh well, another great as always. I can't wait to see what happens next. *disappears to read the next chapter*
2/25/2013 c12 Ushinaware
Yep, yep, scientist claim that even the future is stored in your genes, which you can tap through your dreams. That particular topic is just too intriguing. Its awesome to see you apply them so well here. Again, the plot is getting better and better and I personally think that you are doing a great job. You should seriously consider writing a fiction of your own. You really have the flair for it.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job again! Ganbare!
2/25/2013 c11 UshinawareTaKaze
Awesome chapter! I loved the action bit. The description of the entire scenario was splendidly done. No typos, perfect grammar. In short, I loved it! K off to read the next chapter! :D
1/28/2013 c9 Ushinaware Ta Kaze
Great chapter...waiting for the next!
1/12/2013 c8 Ushinaware Ta Kaze
Thank you for your wishes. Ah, you could try when you feel you have time in English(so that I may read as well. XD).

Yeah, happens. Even when I had initially started my first fanfiction appealed me very much. But, after a while, I felt uncomfortable by the writing style and re-wrote it again. XD

Yes, I do write in fanfiction and fictionpress. Though, I recently started in fictionpress(One chapter), which I shall again resume after 21th February. :P

And finally we see Tokiya Mikagami. XD So, he ended up in Mars as well? :P Well, written again. Loved the intro. Though this time there are slight grammatical mistakes here and there(you are human afterall. XD). But, still loved it. Waiting for the next!
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