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7/20 c6 Lizbet2008
An update! You made my day! I'm working my way through the archives and enjoyed the novel setting of this story but was saddened by its unfinished status. There is now hope for an ending! Thank you for your perseverance and I look forward to reading more. Now off to dig through more of the stories...
10/16/2015 c5 Guest
Brilliant story! However would enjoy an update please :)
8/12/2014 c5 4SMackedCaskett
I don't think I've ever read a "going-back-in-time" story written this well. It's consistent and very entertaining - I look forward to seeing how Don solves his dilemma!

BTW, I love that Mac and Stella are married here ;)
8/9/2014 c5 32lily moonlight
*Snigger* I like the note! Thank you XD I'm happy to have been 'encouraging you' :P Many thanks for the update! Can I start encouraging you for the next one yet? I love Don in this so much. He's just perfect. It's such a great story, too. Love the intrigue and the small clues that you're giving us, and that Don has a stalker! As always, really appreciate the detail that you have in this, it feels completely authentic. More soon!
7/28/2014 c5 44smuffly
Such fantastic storytelling! I love Don's observations about the world around him - so in character, even in this bizarre situation. As always, your attention to detail is great and you've portrayed the alternate CSI characters with a great deal of fondness that really makes them come alive. Can't wait for more!
7/25/2014 c5 Izzi
Oooh, the suspense! I loved this chapter - the length was awesome because you fitted in so much! Definitely excited for more :)

Until next time!
5/11/2014 c4 32lily moonlight
Hello! Happy Sunday afternoon to you :D I'm sitting in one of my favourite cafes, enjoying the sunshine and a cup of tea - the perfect time for some reading and reviewing! I'm really sorry it's taken such a long time for me to review. Thanks so much for the update! I was super-excited to see it :D When's the next chapter coming? ;) I love Don, Mac and Stella in this so much. Don is just perfect - he has exactly the right attitude and compassion, while still having his tough guy front and sense of justice. Love, btw, the touches of humour here such as Danny 'sawing logs' in his sleep XD Stella and Mac are also perfect, they have that same bond and Don recognises it. I'm enjoying this story so much :D Please update again soon!
4/25/2014 c4 11sass box
I know I'm super late, but I was so excited to see that you updated! You're weaving both worlds together beautifully, and I can't wait to see where this goes.
4/24/2014 c4 The account is deleted
You know, I was partly happy annd partly sad to hear you'd been blocked around chapter 9: happy that there are lots more chapters to come, sad if you don't get to finish the story. :C Can I just say I *love* the way everyone is keeping secrets from Flack in this chapter! It just deepens the mysterious intrigue of traveling back in time. You're doing such a wonderful job with this - there, did that help your writer's block any? Impatiently looking forward to more! :D
4/24/2014 c3 The account is deleted
Ahhh, I love all the music in this chapter! It's so vibrant and refreshing. You've done some amazing research to get all the authentic details in place. I love Flack falling head over heels in love with Mac's niece - I think they'd make a lovely couple. Uh-oh, there's trouble in paradise now. Gotta find out what happens next ...
4/22/2014 c2 The account is deleted
Hail, hail, the gang's all here! What a great job you've done introducing them all at the Blue Star - I can see it all happening in front of my eyes! They're all being so wonderfully kind to Flack - it's fun to witness his confusion - he knows them so well - but they don't recognize him. Uh-oh, someone's in trouble now ...? :C
4/22/2014 c1 The account is deleted
I started this story ages ago - thinking it was absolutely brilliant! - then forgot its title and couldn't find it again. :C So glad to see that you've updated - gives me a chance to read another chapter and leave a review or two! You've really got Don Flack down pat - very believable and entertaining inner narrative. What a charming first person narrator he is here - well done!
4/20/2014 c4 44smuffly
I was so delighted to see this story return. It's well- written,original and refreshing, and anything could happen! I also love the way you treat our favourite characters - so different and yet so familiar. Particularly loved the addition of Sid here, and the cell phone - that curious little touch that makes me wonder... Another great chapter and I'll wait happily for the next, no matter how long it takes.
4/17/2014 c4 Izzi
I love it! Well worth the wait.

My one 'nag' would've been that there needs to be more DL - but, having said that, that's only due to my own personal preferences and it looks as though you're definitely giving them consideration, especially near the end there.

Can't wait for more, I know writer's block is a snore particularly when you have the ideas there but they're just not meeting the paper very well. Good luck!

Until next time!
4/17/2014 c3 Izzi
*squeals excitedly*

I was JUST thinking about this fic yesterday and wondering whether you would update it again soon and you have... YOU HAAAAAAAAVE! I am very excited about this and can't wait to read your new chapter (I'm writing this on the previous chapter so I don't spoil myself)
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