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12/14/2020 c17 Anaiyah
omg keep going this story took me a week to finish what happens next? i can't wait to find out do they make it back do they die what happened?
10/29/2020 c1 Guest
Guest chapter 1 . Apr 29
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you...djd
10/20/2020 c17 ashleecornia124
Chapter 18
6/29/2020 c17 ashleecornia24
Chapter 18
6/29/2020 c17 27Selica Leone
idk if I need to see the court with hacker. there's nothing he can do at that point. it's just going to be more of "this is why he sucks"
I'll read it if you write it but imo it's not necessary.
Also are they really going back to their lives on Earth? That seems so wrong! Like they should be able to tell their parents what's going on and say their good byes and move back to cyberspace.
Idk, maybe pop back to earth to visit every now and then? I'm not sure I 100% get how the bracelets work.
alright alright, I'll wait til the next chapter XD
6/29/2020 c16 Selica Leone
Ok I was just gonna review this one and the next at once but hot damn this thing needs its own review.
This is crazy. I can't believe this from a cyberchace fanfic but it's so crazy good and really creepy and dark and honestly really deep with its treatment of abuse and gaslighting.
Well done. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, and even though I started reading years ago, I felt every moment of that celebration.
Thank you for giving us such a good finale.
Onto the next chapter!
6/7/2020 c16 Berry77
That exchange between Hacker and Inez was intense. He really got to her, even if her conscience prevailed. Matt cuddling Inez and trying his best to comfort her is adorable, but will most likely be a fleeting remedy. That stuff never really goes away - you just learn to deal with it.
The extra time this chapter took really shows; it is definitely my favorite out of the newer chapters.
5/28/2020 c16 20gravityfallslover34
that was the best chapter of this story can't to see the next two chapter of this when the saga ends great job
5/21/2020 c15 buddysystem
I've been following this story for a while and gosh! The new chapters really live up to the old ones! You're a great writer, and in my opinion, next to the works of Grand High Idol, this is one of the best cyberchase fanfics out there! Keep going!
5/1/2020 c15 ashleecornia24
Chapter 16
4/28/2020 c15 27Selica Leone
I have to say, I'm delighted to see you updating this. I read it on a trip a while ago, thinking an M rated Cyberchase story would be a joke, but it's surprisingly good. You don't ever stray down the path of making it too edgy or hardcore. The characters are who we've grown to love as kids but older. They're not war torn and gritty, but it's dark and has deep moments. It's not scared to be hard but keep it wholesome enough that you still root for the characters.
I'm happy to see this is still getting updates. It's the only one I'm following that still is :)
4/14/2020 c14 Guest
Gibfhbxefxegvfg this chapter is beautiful
4/13/2020 c13 Berry77
Matt and Inez are so cute together, but she's clearly been through so much. A real theme of trauma and abuse, with some sort of romance and a higher purpose as a remedy. As I mentioned in another review, it's always interesting to see how far someone's writing has come - especially with age. Don't be too embarrassed over your old work; they're all stepping stones to where you are now, as well as snapshots of who you were then.
"The Trade" will soon be a saga that has spanned for almost a decade, and it's easy to see visible development and deeper understanding of the characters and themes over time. I am always impressed, but I am also eager for an ending.
As far as what the ending could be, and I don't want to tell you how to write your story, but I'd like to see something "mixed." Happy endings just aren't visceral enough to fit some of the themes of the story, but a totally terrible ending would be wholly unsatisfying. Maybe a working, but troubled relationship between the two lovebirds? Maybe Inez has a sort of lingering Stockholm syndrome before finally getting her revenge? Maybe someone becomes a martyr for the final victory? Maybe the gang achieves victory, only to find that it was temporary? I'm just tossing ideas out there off the top of my head - do what you want with them.
I honestly don't know what you plan for Chapter 14, but I'm sure it'll be good. Hope you're stocked up, and I'm sorry that you're back home. Maybe it'll be a welcome change of pace, maybe it's a logistical nightmare.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll get my sanitizer ready, as I'm sure it'll be a gosh-darn dirty one. Something's gonna go down.
4/12/2020 c13 Guest
Please a chapter 14! The story is so good and I can’t be left on this cliffhanger! Does slider get saved? Does hacker harm him or do something else extreme? Will the cyber squad call the rest of their friends to help or will one spy for hacker and backstab them? Plz I need to know!
4/7/2020 c1 20gravityfallslover34
great start for year one i barely watched Cyberchase when it was on PBS Kids but this is a good story with the Cyberchase gang
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