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4/11/2016 c7 4Noah Rhodes
it's too bad you stopped working on this
9/18/2014 c7 Guest
Keep writing
Keep writing
Keep writing
Keep writing
Keep writing
PLEEEEEEEAAAAAASE!
9/17/2014 c7 Guest
You HAVE to keep on writing, you HAVE TO!
9/17/2014 c3 Anonymous
OMG it was so good!
I wasn't expecting that!
7/10/2014 c7 Guest
I'm sorry but has anybody questioned how many times odd has to go to the bathroom and how long he has to be in there by how much he eats? out of the blue but is there a actual theory page on that ?
7/10/2014 c7 Guest
keep working! i know you got bored but you can do it use imagination,meditate do wha tever to keep all of your abandoned stories going. ( get odd back in character too )
10/28/2013 c3 1oddellarobia33
good past I like it
4/10/2013 c7 Guest
Keep writing please its so good
4/2/2013 c5 Guest
You have some very good ideas, my friend! I've read two of your Code Lyoko stories and liked the plots along with the creativity that came with them, however, I would advise working a little on your grammar and how you make the characters act..I understand that some are out of character for reasons, but I am not talking about that, those reasons are understandable. The way you make the characters speak is somewhat unrealistic, just in my opinion, and you dont always need to put, "he said." or anything like that after a character speaks, it gets a little repetitive seeing we already know who is speaking. If you do add a third speaker into the conversation, introduce them with a motion or something before they speak..like "Yumi nodded in approval at the suggestion. -Insert Yumi's quote here-" but when you do this, she would be talking with the last person who spoke before her...then you have to introduce the other character when he/she resumes their conversation with whomever Yumi was talking with. Another thing, try adding a little more details and chose more exciting words, use metephors and similies, basic school stuff, but it comes in handy. Again, I love your ideas and your stories are great! But spend somemore time on grammar and details and it will make them better!
3/21/2013 c7 Guest
Keep going
2/22/2013 c7 2MyraLyokoBlack
Its a really good story. But I think you should have Jeremy figure out a way to give Yumi, Ulrich, and Alieta their lyoko powers in the real world to help them fight.
2/16/2013 c7 Azawrath
Omg an update! Keep it up I wanna see where this story leada but is xana involved in this story?

Az
2/1/2013 c6 4Azawrath
need more plz

Azawrath
12/28/2012 c6 Death Account 13
UPDATE SOON!
8/8/2012 c6 Guest
Been over 2 weeks whats taking you so long?
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