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1/10 c61 1mk0008
YOU ARE EVIL

Why did you have to leave it like that?
Pure evil.

In truth, that is a great cliffhanger. Worthy of an award.
11/12/2020 c54 2BeautifulTrauma
Hi!
I really love your story, sadly I can only read every other (or so) chapter... the others are only shown as blank so I haven't read the entire thing... :(
BUT I love ur writing style and I really hope that Martin will come back! Or maybe he already has? IDK, I can't read the next two chapters :/
Lots of Love, Any :)
9/9/2020 c58 5DrWandel
Such an emotional chapter - almost makes one cry. I hope that one of the next ones brings something to uplift her spirits.
8/25/2020 c57 DrWandel
Nicely written!
7/31/2020 c56 5Rose Jean Everdeen
It took me 3 weeks but I have finally come to the end of available chapters. Now I don't know what to do with myself. I can't wait to see what you in store for Tala, and perhaps he descendants? ;)
5/11/2020 c55 Cherucloud
I really enjoyed reading this story! All the characters are interesting and well written. Love it
4/22/2020 c54 5General Obi-Wan Kenobi SIYE
Welcome back and I am glad to see you are well... alive. Being mentioned by authors does put a smile on my face.
11/14/2019 c53 General Obi-Wan Kenobi SIYE
It has been a long while since you've updated. I hope everything is alright and I await an update with eager anticipation.
5/31/2019 c52 The Endless River
You know, I didn't think much of Guilbert in game, I mean, he and his brother were like any other NPC you get to help in their personal quest for me, but in this case, his character development made me come to really like him (and I'd surely like to have such a devoted friend IRL :P) I'm really looking forward to the baby's birth, and see what happens then.

Another great chapter. Good job! :)
5/23/2019 c52 General Obi-Wan Kenobi SIYE
Wonderful. Now the story is moving along. It felt as though it stalled a bit the last few chapters. looking forward to more.
4/29/2019 c50 The Endless River
Ok first of all, my apologies for the possible mistakes in what's about to come, English is not my mother tongue!

I've followed this story for quite a while now, and I know I should have left a review much sooner, but procrastination got the better of me...well, better late than never I guess! (that being said, I think it's a little sad you don't get any more reviews since the last few chapters, your work definitely deserves some more)

So where do I start? First, your character Tala : I really like her, her characterization was nearly perfect to the point I couldn't help but feel empathy for her from the beginning, as we follow her through her journey and all the hardship she goes through . It's a fairly balanced character, powerful but not excessively, with her flaws and her moments of doubt, but at the end of the day she's still as endearing and sweet. As for her relationship with Martin ,the romance growing between them was very well build and pleasant to read, when it comes to romance in fiction, I tend to prefer slow burn like many, and in this case, it was very satisfying, despite knowing how it's all going to end :(

I'm going tho leave things at that, but I'd like you to know that I really look forward to reading this story to the very end, it's definitively a very good one, and you certainly deserve more reviews. Keep one with the good work!
11/20/2018 c43 8Aberron
I love how Jauffre is being basically the nicest he has ever been. Throughout the rest of your story he has been so very demanding and seeing this makes me happy.

The cliffhanger though! I want to know what it is!
10/27/2018 c41 silverhawk88
Whew! What a nail biter that was!
10/9/2018 c40 Fsilta
Great story! More please.
I binge-read it and want more! :)
Thanks for writing it.
8/10/2018 c39 2Aren serathy
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Google “mass facepalm” that was my reaction to Tala saying no only to turn around and say yes. “If you want to get out of this hole, put down the shovel”
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