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12/26/2015 c13 uvb1987
It is good that you have startede this storie up again, you writh werry good. And a Merry Christmas to you too.
12/24/2015 c10 uvb1987
Thank you for starting this story up again.
You are brilliant at wrighting.
And a Merry Christmas or happy Holidays to you.
12/8/2015 c12 1maka loves chocolateee
I liked the story however I thought that the boys names should have been different. I got really confused in some parts because the names were all the same and you sometimes switched between Edd and Double D. Also the beginning could have been explained a bit more. I feel like you rushed the first paragraph. Otherwise I thought the rest of the one shot was really good, I liked the idea of the story even though I thought Double D was a little dramatic. Anyways, I hope you update the original story soon, I would like to see what happens next!
12/12/2012 c4 5vampiregal42
This is different, but really good. I love the crow :-) Keep up the good work!
11/28/2012 c4 LittleSlytherin394
Ooooh! I really, really love this premise! I just know this story is going to be amazing! Can't wait to read your next update! :)
8/3/2012 c1 AGirlAlone
Very interesting. As a piece of advice, you seem to have lots of ellipses in there (...). You should probrably try to take away a couple. A couple of minor errors, nothing big. Keep on writing!
6/1/2012 c1 47MageNellofGalla
Oooh! Intriguing. There's so much mystery behind your OC. I hope you've got a good background for Solaris _ By the way, you didn't really tell us whether Solaris is male or female. I imagine Solaris as a him. I don't know why. Probably because Mithros (God of the Sun) is male as well.

It's a wonderful beginning but (for me) there seems to be a little bit too much mystery (and not enough clues) to really ensure something really awesome. But I'll stay tuned because I believe there's something more. :D Also, your story is littered with grammar mistakes (including a few spelling mistakes) that would be easily spotted by the author. Make sure to reread it after the first draft. And if you're not good at editing, then I wouldn't mind beta reading. Just an offer.. _

Other than that, lovely. I'll stay tuned!

Warmest Regards,

Nell
5/14/2012 c1 1Unicorns by moonlight
Okay, its pretty good, but who is Solaris? It sounds good though, keep it up :) looking forward to the next chapter!

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