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9/22/2016 c19 193LoveLikeElena
Hi! This chapter was really good! I could hear everyone as though this was an extention of book 2! I would have loved to see this in the finale! You do a good job of capturing the character's personalities and emotions!
2/20/2015 c17 Lauren
Hi! I loved this chapter! Senna helping Jinora is very much in character for her and I would have loved to see this scene play out in Book 2! Smile. I'm excited to read more!
2/20/2015 c14 Lauren
I loved this chapter! This is how I wanted the last episode of Book 1 to end. Senna should have said something to her daughter. I really enjoyed this!
11/11/2014 c22 1Imagine476
Nice. I'm curious what Opal and Mako's reaction will be when they find out Bolin "died".
11/11/2014 c19 Imagine476
Awesome. I love that you point out that maybe Korra reminds Lin of Su. Nobody seems to talk about that scene when Lin's hallucinating.
11/11/2014 c22 6LastOrder1
Great chapter :) You did a very nice job with it. As always, I'll be looking foreword for your next chapter ;)
9/2/2014 c21 LastOrder1
Another great chapter here. You did a very nice job with this ;) I think that you did an amazing job with Mako's point of view. After seeing the Season 3 finale, I really hope that Avatar Korra gets better. It would be nice too if she would reconnect with all of the previous avatars as well. I am so excited to see what will happen in Book 4. Oh, I also like too at how Jinora got her Airbender tattoos in the finale. She looked so much like Avatar Aang. Well anyways, you did a great job with this chapter and I'll be looking foreword for your next chapter :)
9/1/2014 c21 Anne
Great Mako POV.
9/1/2014 c15 193LoveLikeElena
Aww! This one was sweet! I thought it was going to be Korra who helped Jinora, but it was good!
9/1/2014 c14 LoveLikeElena
Hi! I really liked this story! I loved Korra's reunion with her parents! I would have loved to see Senna comforting or trying to comfort Korra after Katara announced she couldn't restore the avatar's bending. But the story was awesome!
9/1/2014 c3 LoveLikeElena
Hi! I really loved this! I love Senna and her bond with Korra! I also love Senna/Tonraq as a couple! You wrote them extremely well! I could hear Alex, Janet, and James as though this was part of Welcome to Republic City! I can't wait for more! Would you consider writing a one shot where Senna helps Korra after her battle with Zahir?
8/19/2014 c20 6LastOrder1
Another great chapter here :) You did a very nice job with this and I'll be looking foreword for your next chapter. I've been praying for the refugees in the Middle East too along with Israel. Those people need other people to remember them in their prayers.
8/18/2014 c20 42Bolinlover123
Please keep it up. This is amazing :)
8/6/2014 c18 6LastOrder1
Another amazing chapter here. You did a very nice job with this ;) I really like at how this chapter is based around an episode in season 3. This is very nicely written and I enjoyed giving it a read :) Anyways, great chapter and I'll be looking foreword for your next chapter.
8/5/2014 c18 Guest
Another great chapter!
Since you touched book 3 now, how about writing someting after kidnap-scene where Lin and Su saved Korra from The Red Lotus? Like Lin tells Asami and Korra they both sleep at her place bc she has to keep an eye on the avatar and Korra still doesn't feel very well (I'm sure her head had to hurt a lot after Zaheer used those toxins on her...). No pairings, just friendship/parental-like (Lin is very motherly towards the avatar lastly!).
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