6/30/2012 c5 4Somewhere In the Clouds
This was such a great chapter. I love Jinora's voice in this and her interactions with the other characters, especially Korra and her father, were wonderful. You have the mix of her childish naivety, yet curiosity and watchfulness to a tee. I can't wait to see more!
This was such a great chapter. I love Jinora's voice in this and her interactions with the other characters, especially Korra and her father, were wonderful. You have the mix of her childish naivety, yet curiosity and watchfulness to a tee. I can't wait to see more!
6/1/2012 c5 78the ticking clock
beautifully written, I loved the haunting sadness and Jinora's little girl wisdom. awesome job.
beautifully written, I loved the haunting sadness and Jinora's little girl wisdom. awesome job.
6/1/2012 c5 6LastOrder1
This is a very nice chapter;) I like how it's from Jinora's point of view. You did such a great job with this. I'll be looking forward for your next chapter after you post it:)
This is a very nice chapter;) I like how it's from Jinora's point of view. You did such a great job with this. I'll be looking forward for your next chapter after you post it:)
6/1/2012 c5 8WavesOfGrain94
Jinora was always my favorite of the three airbender kids, being an avid reader myself. I love the way you portrayed her feelings about everything going on! This is awesome, keep up the good work!
Jinora was always my favorite of the three airbender kids, being an avid reader myself. I love the way you portrayed her feelings about everything going on! This is awesome, keep up the good work!