11/8/2018 c1 8Tobiramamara
Seriously? Best written elfquest fic chapter and you didn’t finish? That is a shame... Please update, if you are Still out there...
Seriously? Best written elfquest fic chapter and you didn’t finish? That is a shame... Please update, if you are Still out there...
6/6/2016 c1 Guest
This is a good start to a revision. This version is a lot more detailed, more coherent and structured, and seems much more thoughtful and intentional. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
This is a good start to a revision. This version is a lot more detailed, more coherent and structured, and seems much more thoughtful and intentional. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
6/21/2015 c8 2Lady Green Tea
Please don't take to long to update again, I cannot wait for the next chapter : )
Please don't take to long to update again, I cannot wait for the next chapter : )
12/29/2014 c7 11Rakuen91
Omy god i love it. Why is every good elfquest story with oc's not continued?
Omy god i love it. Why is every good elfquest story with oc's not continued?
6/2/2014 c7 menehune
Hi, I really love the story. Please please please update :)
Hi, I really love the story. Please please please update :)
3/11/2014 c7 11I'llLightUpTheSky4You
Oh please, please, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! It is so amazing, but I can't finish it... :(
Please update!
Oh please, please, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! It is so amazing, but I can't finish it... :(
Please update!
1/14/2014 c7 sephieswings
you are writing a wonderful fan-fic, keep up the great work, because I look forward to reading more of this. As for those nae-Sayers, you can't please everyone all the time, so please yourself, I cut my teeth as it were reading elfquest comics as a child, it isn't the original story and that is alright! It is your story and it is a great one !
you are writing a wonderful fan-fic, keep up the great work, because I look forward to reading more of this. As for those nae-Sayers, you can't please everyone all the time, so please yourself, I cut my teeth as it were reading elfquest comics as a child, it isn't the original story and that is alright! It is your story and it is a great one !
1/13/2014 c7 Guest fan
Interesting! It looks like Skywise finds Starfell relatively attractive - maybe even without the pull of Recognition - and can't help but admire some parts of her personality as well. So it's mostly/only her "humanness" that is repulsive to him. I can't quite tell if it's Recognition's power, or some private thinking process on his part, that's helping him overcome his negative feelings - but then again, is he aware of it himself? ;)
This is great. Please continue!
Greetings from Finland, Europe
Interesting! It looks like Skywise finds Starfell relatively attractive - maybe even without the pull of Recognition - and can't help but admire some parts of her personality as well. So it's mostly/only her "humanness" that is repulsive to him. I can't quite tell if it's Recognition's power, or some private thinking process on his part, that's helping him overcome his negative feelings - but then again, is he aware of it himself? ;)
This is great. Please continue!
Greetings from Finland, Europe
12/28/2013 c7 2Lady Green Tea
Yes a new chapter. I love Elfquest. I am so happy that you are making a Skywise X oc!
Yes a new chapter. I love Elfquest. I am so happy that you are making a Skywise X oc!
11/23/2013 c6 11I'llLightUpTheSky4You
Oh please, please, please continue this story... I want to read it. . . It is amazing!
Oh please, please, please continue this story... I want to read it. . . It is amazing!