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9/2/2018 c1 nbw93
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5/29/2013 c2 45deathcurse
I admire how you have Momoka's voice in this chapter be very distinct from Shizuku's voice in the previous chapter. You write your sentences very differently between the two characters, and that does an enormous job of making Momoka's chapter feel very in-character to me.

I laughed at the part where they tried to work out their fighting style together :P.

Momoka has a pretty caring heart under it all, and I like how you put more thought behind her decision to ask Wanko to be her partner (even though Momoka's still pretty impulsive here) than what the manga showed. I was both very touched and very amused when Momoka tried to learn about auras to better understand Wanko, and the antics from Wanko and Kiji and Michi as a result!

Great stuff, I'm looking forward to reading more!
5/29/2013 c1 deathcurse
I love this story! It does what a good fanfic does: contain enough of the original canon for the readers to recognize the characters and the events that are happening, but provide a deeper layer of understanding/interpretation about the characters that the original story does not.

I love Shizuku and Hitsugi's dynamic here. There's a sense of closeness and respect, but also a strange distance that fits well with canon, despite how I wish they could get together and have fluffy moments :).

It's funny, dramatic, and thoughtful, all at the same time. Great work!

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