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1/20/2013 c1 11ScatterSunshine50
YOU WROTE A BATBOY FIC AND I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT IT?! Oh my gosh, this was so cute! I was actually really confused up until the end because I thought this was an AU where Meredith actually did raise Edgar, and I was like, "WHERE'S SHELLEY WHAT HAPPENED?" And then it made sense. :P

I actually really liked your OC's! John seems really sweet and I would actually be really okay with Shelley falling for him if she wanted to. Aunt Mary seems funny - I like her. :)

I love how Shelley got some closure at the end with little Edgar's drawing. That was so cute XD Is this a continuing fic? It reads great on its own, but I would love to see more if you're planning on it! Great job! I'm excited to have another story in our small little archive, haha
1/12/2013 c1 Dani
Sorry- i dont have an account on fanfiction. There are hardly any fics written about this play and I'm also very fond of it. I was so exited when i saw yours up. The ending took me a minute to figure out but I think I get it and I liked it. Your story had good grammer and spelling, it always bothers me when I see a bunch of mistakes in stories even though I'm very bad with those things myself. The story was really cute, I kind of prefer the ones that happen during he play but that's just my opinion.

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