This is a rewrite of a story that went by a similar name. I was rereading it, and was ashamed of the choppy writing that i had, that hid the potential for a great story. Please offer any constructive criticism you think would help.

NOTE: Con. Crit. is not just telling me you don't like the story. It looks like this:

Reader: I had a bit of trouble understanding the part about X, is there any way you could clear it up? Maybe by explaining Y and Z a little more?

NOT:

Reader2: Your story is terrible.

or

Reader3: Update NOW!

I have had other stories on other platforms get these comments, and as a writer still finding their style, I would rather know why you don't like the story, than just hearing you complain. If you cannot form a reason, send me a PM and maybe we can talk it through. And if you are just trying to be a troll, you aren't going to get to me. I will simply moderate reviews, and nip negative comments posted just to bring people down right in the bud.

Also, We fanfic writers have lives. I know... shocker. We do like to know that our stories are being enjoyed, but constant nagging to update gets irritating. To remedy this, I have a poll on my profile. I will restart the poll every two weeks, and the two highest voted will be updated. In the meantime, either browse others in the fandom, or try the other stories I have written. Who knows, you may find a new fave,

Alright, TEDTalk over... Please enjoy the next chapter whenever it comes out.