Had this weird idea for a retelling of Disney aladdin except some roles changed.

so Aladdin is the prince and Jasmine is the dirt poor street urchin.

I'm not going to include the songs, just the story element

in this story I skipped over the jafar's introduction and cave of wonders for it's the same thing as in the movie.

so were gonna start right to the introductions to our lead.


A young girl was running from the guards, her long black hair tied back into a pony tail as she felt cornered, in her hand was a loaf of bread she 'half' paid for.

" STOP THIEF" the guard leader called, he and his men crept closer to her " I'll have your hands you street runt"

she looked at the bread in her arms " Is this how they treat some one who can only afforded half?" she asked, quick thinking she broke the bread in half and tossed it at the guards " hear I'll just take the half I paid for"

She ran while the guards quickly tried to keep the half of bread from touching the ground. she ran into a line of laundry getting tangled up along the cloths, a pair of shorts fell over her face. As she was getting up she heard some elderly women laugh at her, disguising herself she ran over to the ladies

" Morning" she greeted. one elderly woman shook her head.

" isn't it too early to get in trouble Jasmine?" she asked. Jasmine shook her head disagreeing .

" What? me , in trouble? i paid for my share.." she did get to finished for the guards caught up with her.

" Gotcha" he said garbing her shoulder " your in trouble now".

" I said I paid for my half" Jasmine responded, before the guard could continued his hat was pushed down covering his eyes, a little monkey stood on top grinning.

" where you've been Abu?" jasmine asked, the monkey didn't answer and insted got on her shoulders as the two ran through the small city.

Jasmine and Abu found themselves inside a house, the guards right behind her, she picked up a rug and prepared to jump , the guards al leaped to stop her but she steped aside as they all flew out the window and landed in a pile of manure.

...

Once the coast was clear Abu quickly inspects the bread Jasmine got only to discover half of it was gone. " Sorry Abu" she patted his head " I could only pay for half of it" she continued to walk on until they spotted some children looking for something to eat. she looked at abu who was already looking disappointed

" It's ok Abu" she walked over to the hungry children, she gave them the half of loaf she got " go on, it's ok" she patted the young girl head, she then walked away. Abu looked back at the kids who were happily eating away at the bread the little girl looked at the monkey and tore of a small piece to offer to him, Abu tried to decline but the little girl insisted he take it. Abu was about to take a bite when the citizen of Agrabah started to gather on the streets.

Jasmine and Abu made way to see what was going on. A young woman dressed in a outfit that made her look like a peacock marched proudly on a white horse.

" Another suitor for the Prince" one man said in a bored tone, acording to them the Prince has rejected every princess that comes to call.

the two kids quickly ran into the street, the little boy not watching where he was going almost got stepped on but his sister quickly caught him. the white horse reared up being startled by the kids.

" Disgusting brats" the princess called out, Jasmine was quick to their defense she stood before the kids as the princess struck her across the face with her crop.

" If this is how you treat children I would hate to see how your future children turn out... That's if the prince marries you.. Or hires you as a nanny" she garbed the crop from the princess's hand and threw back at her.

" How dare you" the princess flicked the reins of her horse and they rudely shove jasmine out of the way making her fall into the mud, the citizens laughed at her, Jasmine ignored them " not every day you see a horse with 2 rear ends" The horse stopped, the princess looked back.

" Ha, your nothing but a disgusting creature, why don't you go back to the hole you came from and just die so the rest of us don't have to see your ugly face" she taunted, the palace door slammed before Jasmine could run after her.

she sighed, Abu was by her side " Let's go home" she and the monkey walked on the empty streets, the two climbed up ladders.

Jasime's home wasn't much, a broken beam laid on the floor, Abu went over to his bed which was a pillow, Jasmine tucked in in, she opened the curtain to look at the palace that glowed in the night sky.

" Some day Abu, We'll be rich and living in a palace and not having to worry for our lives".


I figure Jasmine wouldn't be a real thief, she more like to bargain then steal ( work for food or something) and Abu would still be the same but not on the verge of a klepto.

yes Abu is with jasmine, you can't really do much with a tiger being taught to steal.

yes Jafar will still be the same, so this is gonna be fun writing his interaction