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12/15/2018 c3 9John Smith
Ooh I loved this chapter! A lot of interesting moments and so, so much great Credence perspective. Seeing the way Jacob and Queenie are bonding is a real treat, and the entire interaction between Newt and Credence at the end was a top fave moment so far. Seeing Newt open up to Credence is so sweet, and I can definitely see the way he'd see himself in that boy. Also, until I read the author's note at the bottom it didn't occur to me that you were writing this before seeing the second film. Top congratulations for writing Theseus so much like his film persona! I really enjoy that! Of course he's a bit more protective in the film, but you have elements of that already. The thing I find most amusing about Theseus in the film is that he's supposed to be 9 years older than Newt but he's got baby face and looks even younger. Lol, love it. Great chapter!
12/12/2016 c3 Guest
Oh wow. What wonderful story. You keep actual action in it while still developing the characters' stories, which are really well written, and you stay true to their personalities as shown in the movie. I love reading it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

One thing I noticed... I'm pretty sure Dumbledore's beard isn't white yet. In Tom Riddle's time, he's hair is described as being brown, if I remember, but appart from that, good job.
12/14/2016 c3 4T-tawny
Newt is just such a good egg. And he will help Credence, I can just feel it.
*Shang from Mulan voice* You write good.
12/14/2016 c3 8booksfoodmusic-minion
Omg this is amazing!
I'm loving the character development!
12/13/2016 c3 2LadyTeldra
Finally found time to read this fic~ Been wanting to since the moment I saw it in my inbox. College has kept me extremely busy though. I'm glad I waiting to give this my full attention.

Thank you for writing.
12/10/2016 c3 163eggs
This is wonderful! I'm loving it!

Update soon or else!
12/10/2016 c3 Future Skulljockey
Excellent!
12/7/2016 c3 Guest
A few thoughts meant in the most constructive sense: where did the nurse come from? Why did they all suddenly appear at hogwarts? You need more build up to muggers discovering magic. As of now it blindsides the reader. Overall you need more explanation in the the who, what, where, when, why department.
12/7/2016 c3 cantstandphysics
*soft chanting* more more more more *loud chanting *MORE MORE MORE MORE.
12/7/2016 c3 2blue candlelight 13
I didn't even know you'd posted a new story! This is great!
12/7/2016 c3 LavenderRoseBleedingHeart
Awesome chapter!
12/7/2016 c3 11Fai's smile
Gallows humor about Azkaban? Scaring poor confused No-majs with thestrals? Credence has internalised issues? Newt's older brother is either shamelessly cruel or plays plausible deniability card whenever he happans to show that he cares? It makes for a great chapter. And the creatures are simply lovely.

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